Your art is Very Good.I say you can do Better! Try with more manga titles,such as:
a)Inuyasha. b)Zero No Tsukaima.c)Black Lagoon.
a)It’s great fantasy series,Inuyasha uses his Tetsusaiga sword,Kikyo’s marksmanship skills too,Sango with her sword as well.Well is interesting the villainess,Yura,with her sword.Lol…Plus that it’s about a love relationship that went wrong,the hot question in the whole run is if it can be saved.
Btw there’s Inuyasha stuff in Aparat.com/(Why isn’t any of it yet in Facenama?).
In ZNT Saito turns out as a Brilliant character,swordsman as well!